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 Post subject: Re: Lunatic Voices
PostPosted: Sun Jun 04, 2017 1:45 am 
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 Post subject: Re: Lunatic Voices
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 Post subject: Re: Lunatic Voices
PostPosted: Sun Oct 07, 2018 4:11 pm 
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Hey there's some artwork on here!

Has anyone heard of "Exhausted Milk" or have any theories about what it is?

I had a vision about it and got kinda worried that it could be a conspiracy to kill Satan by isolating specific ions in animal proteins.

Maybe its used to clean machinery and then collected in huge vats and then labeled as such and shipped out for disposal?!


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 Post subject: Re: Lunatic Voices
PostPosted: Thu Oct 18, 2018 12:09 pm 
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It's kinda weird to just scurry to this corner to share creative writing! There's a demon that needs to be banqueted.

I was thinking about voting in the M:EM, yet i would prefer to dip my toes in silicone.

There's not really a format, i just wrote this on a napkin so i kept it in the same shape as the room on the napkin made it in.

Do you ever wonder what it's
like to be dead?
Your spirit is cooking,
Shimmering wavering
heat waves above
desert sand
Two young boys were
wrestling in the deep end
of a pool
You were the weaker one
Barely escaping you lay
exhausted upon the hot
wet cement rim

Poetry is kinda weird to me because it seems like such a trifle though that could be because this thread is practically bordering on spammy.

Demon eaten.


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 Post subject: Re: Lunatic Voices
PostPosted: Fri Oct 19, 2018 1:32 pm 
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I was googling 'exhausted food' but not quickly answereing!

I think exhausted food items are when all of the nutritional value/energies are removed from the food during some kind of process until it looks like sewage waste!
I'm not sure what it would be used for or if its a delicacy somewhere?

I was looking more forward to writing here but my girlfriend wrote that she is overwhelmed because her son's grandparent passed away so now i'm just stressed out and embarassed.

I want to write more about what the voices in my head say... I may go ahead and expound upon the last year of my life soon because i think it might be pertinent. trying to be good.

Anyway here's another poem-


Legs that glow in the sun
Shiny metal by them
Old men sprinkled with aftershave
Stinking in polished leather
"Good morning" back is a bird sailing on winds of a distant planet


I threw a tantrum at the world and erased the thread, yet it was good for other reasons like i was incorporating too many words that were maybe from voices in my head not mine, so i'm trying not to do that this time keeping the poems as much me as i can.


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 Post subject: Re: Lunatic Voices
PostPosted: Fri Oct 26, 2018 11:42 am 
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Can legacies die? Is looking backwards always a fuller view?
Depression doubts desire, making her seem a catacomb of cobwebs swinging, tatters sparkling torn.
Gleaming Buicks like The Labyrinth and The Neverending Story have the textures of loneliness and fantasy you're searching for. Reconciliation hates you.
Meth-pipes **** us. Demons embarrassed us! We treated our souls like pig slop.
Maybe cupcakes and coffee can keep men's hair soft and flowing, teeming with lush beauty, sleek and bouncy like its dancing in a warm pool.
Atomized waves barking against gravity are cutting your skull up.

It's funny when poetry seems too tame i guess you have to try to make it more shocking to give it more punch.


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 Post subject: Re: Lunatic Voices
PostPosted: Fri Oct 26, 2018 3:42 pm 
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It's funny cuz now that i wrote that and about it being tame it seems backwards and against a mushier taste of poetry so i guess i might stick with a more mushy style, i really like the 5th line except i would take out the word "maybe" and then put and exclamation point.

thinking about how to treat mens hair in a line is cracking me up its so funny.

I like just writing a lot about how i feel on here even if its trivial and stuff kinda like im just talking to myself and getting some juices flowing if anyone has words thats fine, i might comment on some things later. I might go write some more poetry today.

have a nice day everyone.


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 Post subject: Re: Lunatic Voices
PostPosted: Fri Nov 02, 2018 11:40 am 
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He's turning thirty today. It's not quite what he was expecting. Men casually talk in a love language he can't understand. It's soothing, like water trickling onto rocks in a stream. A young man shoveling spoonfuls of cereal with milk into his face talks with his mouthful. He's never hated pears in his life, but there's something different about today.


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Respecting Chess:

Chess is a game I've usually been rather fond of for most of my life! It's a very fast paced game of intrigue and seduction.

I was regarding the Chess game, and had an idea! My idea was about spicing up the setting of Chess. The actual game board could be more pictorial. There could be pictures on the game board so it looks like a nature setting or there could be a diorama of sculpted miniature settings to engross the viewer, including the pieces being sculpted to resemble their character better. This is kinda a basic idea, though i believe its nice to refresh it. My best idea for adding texture elements to chess was to make it a card game called "Chess! A Card Game". There could be ways to pump up your army by drawing from a stack. For example: You draw a card that says " Target pawn gets 1/1 and can attack forwards." or " target horse can move twice this turn and jump any character."


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