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Shall we save the Souls of the Unshriven?
Why the **** not? (Yea): 83%  83%  [ 5 ]
No ****ing way! (Nay): 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Watch your language! (Not As Is): 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Leave me the **** out of this (Abstain): 17%  17%  [ 1 ]
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 13, 2018 4:17 pm 
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Title: Souls of the Unshriven
Author: RavenoftheBlack
Status: Public
Word Count: 11,298

An uncensored version of this story is available here: Souls of the Unshriven.

Souls of the Unshriven


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PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2018 11:26 am 
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2018 10:32 pm 
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**** yeah! :D

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 24, 2018 9:18 pm 
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It is with some small regret that I too accept this story, for it subtly shoves everything I've written about Orida even more firmly into non-canonical territory. Yet it is far too masterful to disagree with, and certainly better than my meager offerings.

The note about dead air was odd, until I realized that there was no indication of timing since Phantoms of the Past, and that rocks themselves leach oxygen from the air.

Meanwhile, the Rag Man is amazing, and Orida is as, um, charming as ever.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2018 5:15 pm 
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Brentain wrote:
It is with some small regret that I too accept this story, for it subtly shoves everything I've written about Orida even more firmly into non-canonical territory. Yet it is far too masterful to disagree with, and certainly better than my meager offerings.

Thank you! For the record, I think you write Orida very well, and while the plots of her various exploits may no longer fit in with canon, you have contributed a lot to her characterization, both with the short Penelophine piece and in VITAL. And as always, if you are ever interested in writing for Orida, I would always love to see more of her stuff!

Brentain wrote:
The note about dead air was odd, until I realized that there was no indication of timing since Phantoms of the Past, and that rocks themselves leach oxygen from the air.

Tevish pointed out in the original thread that not everywhere in Ythol is likely to be this oxygen-starved, so Orida probably just got unlucky. You know, like pretty much every time she does things...

:D

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Meanwhile, the Rag Man is amazing,

Thanks! I was really happy with the Rag Man and its unique sort of interaction with Orida. Her ability to speak with the dead is the only thing that allows these poor souls to communicate their plight. I also like the implications of the nature of the afterlife on Dammerdall, that the souls of those of the Church who have died unshriven are trapped.

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and Orida is as, um, charming as ever.
:D

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Thanks for reading, Brentain, and for voting! It's always appreciated!


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