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Will the Archive be Seeing Red?
Yea: 86%  86%  [ 6 ]
Nay: 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Not As Is: 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Abstain: 14%  14%  [ 1 ]
Total votes : 7
Total voters : 7
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 Post subject: [Vote] Seeing Red
PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2018 7:25 pm 
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Title: Seeing Red
Author: RavenoftheBlack
Status: Public
Word Count: 2906

This story is for the voting week of...May 2018.

Seeing Red


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 Post subject: Re: [Vote] Seeing Red
PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2018 7:27 pm 
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I made one minor change from the original. I was never really happy with the weight issue of the bag, so I got rid of the reference to its weight after the trick is pulled and instead describe it as "filled."


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 Post subject: Re: [Vote] Seeing Red
PostPosted: Mon Apr 30, 2018 1:38 am 
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Obvious Yea from me :party:

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 Post subject: Re: [Vote] Seeing Red
PostPosted: Mon Apr 30, 2018 2:50 pm 
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This piece is obviously a fraud! Raven would never write something so optimistic!

Anyway, I felt that the main character was really relatable, and the build to the climax was gripping. I am also a fan of the understated climax, so I am voting yea here.

Thank you for sharing!

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 Post subject: Re: [Vote] Seeing Red
PostPosted: Mon Apr 30, 2018 9:12 pm 
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Aaarrrgh wrote:
This piece is obviously a fraud! Raven would never write something so optimistic!

Clearly, you've forgotten about a little story called... :huh:

...Well...

:blush:


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 Post subject: Re: [Vote] Seeing Red
PostPosted: Sun May 13, 2018 1:20 pm 
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I mean, we all know I like it. :D

Yea from me!

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 Post subject: Re: [Vote] Seeing Red
PostPosted: Sun May 13, 2018 10:32 pm 
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I mean, we all know I like it. :D

Yea from me!

Really? I thought you really disliked Scar. My memory's not what it used to be, but I'm pretty sure that's what you said...

:huh:

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