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What's the right time for healing?
Now, even if it burns. (Yes) 75%  75%  [ 3 ]
Later. Let the eyes stop crying, let the wounds stop bleeding on their own. (No) 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
How about shrimp instead? (NAI) 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Abstain (Abstain) 25%  25%  [ 1 ]
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 Post subject: [Vote] Healing Path
PostPosted: Mon Jul 02, 2018 8:56 am 
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Required readings: Another Day, Another Fight [Part 1: Warming Up] [Part 2: Corruption]
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 Post subject: Re: [Vote] Healing Path
PostPosted: Thu Jul 19, 2018 11:53 am 
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Sorry it's taken me so long to get to this, but it's been a surprisingly busy month.

Anyway, as I've stated in the original threads, I'm a big fan of this story and especially of Sharaka. There are so many little moments throughout this story that I like, like the kid sneaking into Sharaka's room, the bit with the stairs, the flirtatious twin, all of it. But the over-arching story of Sharaka coming to terms with, well, everything, is what really carries the whole thing. I'm also very fond of Elphimas in this story, more so than in previous stories, and especially that moment in the library that is so humanizing for them.

There are some phrasing things that I'm not a huge fan of, moments where Sharaka sounds just a bit too "modern" for my taste, but that is purely a personal preference thing. Others, I'm sure, would disagree, and anyway, it's not nearly enough for me to give the thumbs down.

Easy "Yea" from me!


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